Nowhere, Man

Nowhere, Man

A Poem by Pure Hope
"

To use a title of a Beatles tune in a totally different way

"

Fast in flight
Boundless locations
Furious fight
to be sensations
Looking for all that

a star has on call
in a world of the famous

enigmatic relations

But where are you really going?
What do you hope to find?

What is the gold you are reaching
for? And when will you stop
looking behind?

It's just nowhere, man.

Another day of insane fans
No time to yourself to rest
You have to work to stay the best.
Or you'll end up just like all of the rest.

Nowhere, man.

© 2012 Pure Hope


Author's Note

Pure Hope
Not using the song or lyrics, but the title in a whole different way. What do you think?

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I felt that the first verse was rather truncated in relation to the next two. The final line 'enigmatic relations' seems to have been chosen merely to rhyme, rather than to contribute to the meaning of the poem. The 'for' should have been appended to the line before it rather than beginning a new line. Otherwise an interesting write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Pure Hope

11 Years Ago

Thank you, all your education and advice is appreciated!



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I felt that the first verse was rather truncated in relation to the next two. The final line 'enigmatic relations' seems to have been chosen merely to rhyme, rather than to contribute to the meaning of the poem. The 'for' should have been appended to the line before it rather than beginning a new line. Otherwise an interesting write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pure Hope

11 Years Ago

Thank you, all your education and advice is appreciated!

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Added on November 28, 2012
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Pure Hope
Pure Hope

Heartbreak Lake, MN



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Started to write basic poetry in my teens, now with "real" poets I am honing my craft. My poems found here are already on my AllPoetry site. Same name, as here. My muse is love, be it love of nature t.. more..

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