Love Gone Wrong

Love Gone Wrong

A Poem by XinHyun
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hmmmmmm

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Did you change? Have I?
The sight of you
used to bring such pain.
What is it I feel now?

. . .I'm numb.
I'm stumped,
do I still like you?
I am not in love.
I do not love you.

But why is it,
that when I see you,
when you speak with me,
my heart feels sad?

I can never surprise you
or never amuse you.
I am never someone so exciting.
Stop telling me you miss me,
stop acting like you care.

© 2012 XinHyun


Author's Note

XinHyun
ne advice? :/

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It seems like there are some really powerful emotions in this poem and that's what I love about it. It is easy to relate to, and while reading it I remember what I have been through. The last two lines were what caught me the most because that's what means the most. Great poem hun.

Posted 9 Years Ago


XinHyun

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much :)
Very interesting layout. I like the way the emotions are expressed, they seem more raw and thus more real

Posted 9 Years Ago


XinHyun

9 Years Ago

thank you, that really means a lot since I don't think I write very well.
Dark Tower

9 Years Ago

I've read your other work, dont under sell yourself, you're an amazing writer
XinHyun

9 Years Ago

thank you :) really

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