If nothing else.

Barely able to breathe;
Questions that couldn't be answered by mankind.
Standing on cracked concrete.
Hoping for a breeze to dry the sweat on my face.
I pray; if I can't trust this world, and it's population of confusion,
I'll trust someone else.
I whisper to God to calm my soul.
Hum a praise, bow my head.
Sway, and hope for a tomorrow.

You, that's what I've got left.
If nothing else.

Author's Note

Honestly, it was just a thought.
Not meant to be a poem, and it's not.
Uncontrolled writing, results in random postings.

Reviews

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

this poem is so full of hope at least thats what it made me feel and dipped in a pot of sadness I liked it a lot

100/100

[S Sanders]

A friend once told me that random thoughts make the best poetry. Sometimes I "free write" and then come back to it and piece it together until it makes a poem. How wonderful that we always have SOMETHING--always.

[cfix]

I really like this,
I can feel this write.
Very well presented.

[OT]

despite not intentionally being a poem, its form is pretty poetic, and the sentiments are strong! really nice piece!!

[Adam :P]

like the ending, and free versve good metaphor and imagery.

[IComeAnon]

I enjoy the hook at the end. The main body is like a prose sonnet, if such a thing could be. A problem, a resolution, but the ending really conveys the sense of loneliness while maintaining strength.

[David W Moore III]

But meant to be or not, it's free form verse. Imagery - check, metaphor - check good - check!

[violet michelle]

by the way, who is this about? O.o

[violet michelle]

... My point; proved.
(;

[Brittany W]

this was very well expressed, even if it wasnt meant to be a poem i still thought of it as one, great write.