Autumn

Autumn

A Poem by That1Nerd23

This autumn has kissed the earth with her grace

And draped her colors like bright pure lace

She’s melted the sorrow of broken hearts

With removing all old and granting new starts

 

She whispers a melody in the trees

You can hear her in the rumbling leaves

O, listen to the birds as they sing praise

To our Heavenly Father, whom my soul has raised

 

Watch as the leaves fall to the ground

And embrace the mystery of where their bound

For soon the wind will run in haste

And all at once the leaves will be chased

 

They’ll play Hide and Seek

They’ll play Tag You’re It

Like children all but meek

As their mothers watch and knit

 

Yes, this autumn has offered her bliss

She’s offered magic for each lovers’ kiss

And on dark nights, still, she’s in the air

For she fragrances the wind with all her care

© 2012 That1Nerd23


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You know you need to take this further, publish it or something... otherwise it will a such a lot of wasted talent... Heavenly poem *__*

Posted 10 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

10 Years Ago

Why thank you! I'd love to publish it but don't reallly...know how? :/
Beautiful rhyming in a beautiful poem. I really really enjoy this. GREAT job!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Thaaaaaank youuuuu! ((:
Two thumbs up! Five stars! 100/100!

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!!! ((:
There's a wistful and graceous style to your writings that helps them standout as gracious soul soothing poems. I have found a new sense of appreciation for autumn now. It's a time for slowing down and becoming more retrospective with your spiritual and social health. Great work with the colorful lettering. It gives your work a radiance of it's own. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Thank you. That means a lot that you feel that way. I am so thrilled that you were able to discover .. read more
I don't know how you pick the colors. Yeah, they don't represent Autumn, but they caught my eye. Best write I've ever read. Keep it up!

100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Yeah, I was only going to do Autumn colors, but then I decided to just explode with colors instead. .. read more
Amazing imagery, and once again love the format :):):)

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Why thank you, madam! ((:
love the imagery I get from this poem
I love fall! I really enjoyed reading this :D
Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Thank you, Miss! That's a very kind thing for you to say. ((:
Awesome write....probably the best i hav read from you..this one goes to the shelf

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Awe, thank you! That means a lot! I feel honored. :D
Well written as always also enjoyed your presentation of the piece keep it up

Posted 11 Years Ago


That1Nerd23

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I appreciate it! (:

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