A Poem by Jessalynn

Today mark four years since I lost one of the best men I've ever known. I still love him and don't think I'll ever stop. Writing about him brings me some comfort. I need a title...Suggestions?

Its been quite awhile now
This hurt just won't heal
All it takes is a moment 
And I'm pulled back down to me knees 
Its strange to think that something so small
Could reduce me to nothing but rubble
But when you heart is made of playing cards
It doesn't take much to crumble
I thought I was strong but then you were gone
Now all I have are memories but they are such a tease
And I want to believe that it gets better
But even after all this time has passed my heart is still on fire
Burning for you
Yearning for you
Sometimes its a flame 
Sometimes its an ember
All I have to do is remember 
Because I'm still on fire 
Burning for you
Yearning for you...

© 2019 Jessalynn

Author's Note

Please critique and if you have title suggestions please let me know.

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"I See You Every Sunset."

What's to critique? I can only wish a woman sees me your way... after.

Posted 4 Months Ago

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4 Months Ago

Thank you I'll keep that title in mind.

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Added on June 14, 2019
Last Updated on June 14, 2019
Tags: #Grief, #love, #death, #loss, #heart