Bath Time

Bath Time

A Poem by Jessica Gillitzer
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My time.

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Bath Time


Drop my sunflower dress in a crumple floral mess

I need relief, need to wash away my griefs

Slide out of my restrictions and and in to nude contradictions

Warm water and steam making the bathroom so much hotter

I find my home in this blissful foam

Water and bubbles to melt away my troubles

Candles light this quiet moment in my night

I’m here to forget my worries

Head filled with stories

Wonderful words, and choosing not to have feathers

Here in this water I’d rather be tethered

So I dream of faraway places and first time faces

I linger here, sleep near

But I am not within these tiles

No I’m long gone

Possibly thousands of miles


Bath time brings me smiles…




© 2016 Jessica Gillitzer


Author's Note

Jessica Gillitzer
Who doesn't love a good bath?

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Ah, there's nothing like a hot bath to wash away the stress of the day. You've proven that you can turn the simplest subject into a lovely piece of poetry:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


This piece brings me smiles.
Amazing experience shared efficiently.:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hmmm if I was a boy , I would be dreaming about the bath with you lol, its an amazing poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


Soft and what "quiet my-time" is all about.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jessica Gillitzer

10 Years Ago

so true. < 3
< 3 Jessie
i find a nice hot bath to be so relaxing and casual. a shower is too much like walking and spinning around to get all the bits cleaned is dizzying....excellent little foray into the releases of a great bathtub experience...who woulda thunk it?

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jessica Gillitzer

10 Years Ago

i've been told i can find a way to turn poetic almost anything, maybe not a good poem but one never .. read more
quinfinn

10 Years Ago

i think it's a terrific poem...makes me want to go take another bath, even though i just got out abo.. read more
Jessica Gillitzer

10 Years Ago

Oh my country boy, i do love my baths. though usually I get all my yeehaw out before I get there... .. read more
Peaceful imagery, but not in a perverted way >_

Posted 10 Years Ago


Jessica Gillitzer

10 Years Ago

thank you Kelly, I didn't want it to be to sexual mostly just sensitive and sweet.
i'm glad yo.. read more
Oh wow ^_^ this is beautifully written. You totally set the mood :) you painted a perfect picture before that photo appeared. Lovely photo by the way :3 xxx

Posted 10 Years Ago


Simon Welsh

10 Years Ago

;) I'm being good! aha xxx
Jessica Gillitzer

10 Years Ago

;o)
Simon Welsh

10 Years Ago

I'm trying anyway xD ;) xxx

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Added on May 8, 2013
Last Updated on April 28, 2016
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Jessica Gillitzer
Jessica Gillitzer

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Writing when ever I can. As much as I can. I read and love writing poetry, it is ever so helpful for my issues. I've done photography and got into some modeling here and there for a while, I'm 2.. more..

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