Red

Red

A Poem by [email protected]!

Red is passion

the stain of her lips

the tint of his cheeks

in response to this

the bud of a rose

 

Its a daring heart

and life

and love

and energy

and confidence

 

Red is

roses and high heels

and his brilliant teeth

wrapped in my favorite smile

a lively heartbeat

© 2008 [email protected]!


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A really wonferful short poem.
I like your use of the associations people have with red - passion, love etc. There was a real innocence about it though.
The imagery of the opening was really affective - the links between her lips an his cheeks. I like the line about red high heels - I read somewhere that they are very suggestive.
This is a great poem. Congrats.
Great to read something new by you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Small amount of words but a huge amount of feeling. Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like that you used red. Not only is red a color usually associated with love, but it is connected to passion. And to me the color is pretty sexual. I find the poem to be romantic, but also sexual.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What a cool poem! My favorite color is RED.
I love the way you ended this ,brought a
smile to my face.

Thanks for sharing.

Kelley

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I chose to read this coz I actually started on a poem myself a while ago titled Red......and surely did use a few words and objects here but was going a different direction with them......
So twas real nice reading this version coz it makes me smile to see how really unique we all are.....

I think u nailed what u wanted to say in a few words here! Fantastic!

x,
O!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good job is all I can say.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hehe, yea, this really made me smile! Loved it. The warmth of true love and its embrace, everlasting. Very beautiful poem :)

B.A.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful color, red. Good job on this poem, so happy to see fresh work from you!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i've never read a poem like this. it evokes these feelings i can't describe but the feelings are good. i love this!

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The first and third stanzas flow with artistry, but the second stanza is abrupt and repetitive. Revising the middle with more detail, perhaps, would make this a stronger poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I always liked erotic poetry

your words are nice
not one too much
just perfect

thankyou for interpretation of red colour
I've alway liked red
Artur

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Heather, I'm twenty, future author and english teacher, highly analytical, The Vampire Diaries, A Tale of Two Cities, both classic and modern literature, the Victorian era, Coco Chanel, ext.. more..

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