Miniture Utopia

Miniture Utopia

A Poem by [email protected]!
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Haiku for creative writing:)

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Muscles burn sweetly

as mist cools my sunkissed face

Dancing in the sea

© 2008 [email protected]!


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Ah it's great to see a haiku again! They are hard to get right at times, yet you managed perfectly with this one. Lovely images ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

How nice. Going into that moment of dance and movement, a physical poem in motion.
Creating the scene you want. The scene where you want to be.

A true utopia, amazing :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So much felt in so few words, that's poetry! Pure enchantment flowing like a silky stream.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I liked this. You created a very beautiful image. A very memorable haiku. :]

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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It's obvious I'm not very good at these myself, but you get the idea. nice write. nice picture, too...

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Excellent...words of potency and desire.



Posted 12 Years Ago


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impressive, I love the imagery used in this one...and it's very vibrant too...Good job. ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on August 27, 2008
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My name is Heather, I'm twenty, future author and english teacher, highly analytical, The Vampire Diaries, A Tale of Two Cities, both classic and modern literature, the Victorian era, Coco Chanel, ext.. more..

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