Miniture Utopia

Haiku for creative writing:)

Muscles burn sweetly

as mist cools my sunkissed face

Dancing in the sea

Reviews

[Jonathan Ballam]

Ah it's great to see a haiku again! They are hard to get right at times, yet you managed perfectly with this one. Lovely images ;-)

[Eternally Elemental]

How nice. Going into that moment of dance and movement, a physical poem in motion.
Creating the scene you want. The scene where you want to be.

A true utopia, amazing :)

[Arthur Crow]

So much felt in so few words, that's poetry! Pure enchantment flowing like a silky stream.

[J.K.P.]

I liked this. You created a very beautiful image. A very memorable haiku. :]

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Haiku
I like very much
Yes, indeed, I like very much, oh yes...

It's obvious I'm not very good at these myself, but you get the idea. nice write. nice picture, too...

[Forest Green]

Excellent...words of potency and desire.

[Kaito Asuke]

impressive, I love the imagery used in this one...and it's very vibrant too...Good job. ^_^