Of Earth and Of Heaven

Of Earth and Of Heaven

A Poem by [email protected]!

Dance with me along the horizon

Lose yourself on the sunset's edge

Stand gazing with me on the clouds

Searching for glimpses of Heaven

© 2008 [email protected]!


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This is very sweet. I'm a fan of horizon imagery and you've used it very well. This poem is brimming full, and might I even suggest overflowing, with joy. There is wonder to be found in everything and here it is very simply and strongly stated.

This plucked at some of the string of my heart and certainly made me smile.

Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Short and Sweet, But very nice. I am a big fan of nature..sunsets..sunrises. I like its simplicity

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

beautiful play with words.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This poem reminded me of a girl I knew in Arizona. She took me out to the desert and showed me how to appreciate the sunset. Seems like she said those very same words.

Beautiful poem, very well done. Thank you.

-Charred Faith


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the innocence of this poem. It's beautiful and well worded.
Good job :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Youth singing:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really bright and warming, very good emotions and wording.

-Will

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this...the imagery is amazing...well the whole poem is amazing.
Great Job

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very sweet. I'm a fan of horizon imagery and you've used it very well. This poem is brimming full, and might I even suggest overflowing, with joy. There is wonder to be found in everything and here it is very simply and strongly stated.

This plucked at some of the string of my heart and certainly made me smile.

Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. A cool poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


What a wonderful poem. I love the sensual and romantic imagery and mood to the piece. The poem is very enticing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Heather, I'm twenty, future author and english teacher, highly analytical, The Vampire Diaries, A Tale of Two Cities, both classic and modern literature, the Victorian era, Coco Chanel, ext.. more..

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