Of Earth and Of Heaven

Dance with me along the horizon

Lose yourself on the sunset's edge

Stand gazing with me on the clouds

Searching for glimpses of Heaven

Reviews

[Odrah]

This is very sweet. I'm a fan of horizon imagery and you've used it very well. This poem is brimming full, and might I even suggest overflowing, with joy. There is wonder to be found in everything and here it is very simply and strongly stated.

This plucked at some of the string of my heart and certainly made me smile.

Well done.

[Balthazar]

Short and Sweet, But very nice. I am a big fan of nature..sunsets..sunrises. I like its simplicity

[alan khan]

beautiful play with words.

[Charred Faith]

This poem reminded me of a girl I knew in Arizona. She took me out to the desert and showed me how to appreciate the sunset. Seems like she said those very same words.

Beautiful poem, very well done. Thank you.

-Charred Faith

[Eye0fthebeh0lder]

I like the innocence of this poem. It's beautiful and well worded.
Good job :)

[Mononoke]

Youth singing:)

[Dillon Cotter]

This is really bright and warming, very good emotions and wording.

-Will

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I like this...the imagery is amazing...well the whole poem is amazing.
Great Job

[Eric Cox]

Very beautiful. A cool poem.

[Anthony Thomas]

What a wonderful poem. I love the sensual and romantic imagery and mood to the piece. The poem is very enticing.