Of Earth and Of Heaven

Of Earth and Of Heaven

A Poem by [email protected]!

Dance with me along the horizon

Lose yourself on the sunset's edge

Stand gazing with me on the clouds

Searching for glimpses of Heaven

© 2008 [email protected]!


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This is very sweet. I'm a fan of horizon imagery and you've used it very well. This poem is brimming full, and might I even suggest overflowing, with joy. There is wonder to be found in everything and here it is very simply and strongly stated.

This plucked at some of the string of my heart and certainly made me smile.

Well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This a short but lovely, dreamy write. Well penned.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and pretty. You express a lot with only 4 lines which is clearly an indication of talent emerging. Beautiful penmanship. Keep on writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

gorgeous! very concise but it says everything it needs to :)
very few people have this skill of saying so much in so few words- most cloud their ideas in far too many words...
i love this! thanks for sharing :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its very good. very beautiful. you have great skills my friend.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is strong and concise with few wasted words and clear imagery.

I have walked here as have many

well done
Ven

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ahhhhh its pretty :D
i love your stuff its soo good :]

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

short and beautiful. i love this poem. so simple, but so powerful. well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done. Short and sweet.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice words ,lots of images ,and full of love,dance with me,lose yourself ,stand gazing,lovely words ,why i was so taken with i always go with long lines like a story telling but you put few words ,but you tel a lot ,amazing really loved it all

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Beautiful imagery.
I like it that you refer to someone else except you in it � creates some sort of happiness.

A.M.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Heather, I'm twenty, future author and english teacher, highly analytical, The Vampire Diaries, A Tale of Two Cities, both classic and modern literature, the Victorian era, Coco Chanel, ext.. more..

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