Change.

I am the change
in me, there is
a touch of longing.
 I stare at
empty walls
that echo my
empty heart
and sigh:
fill me up.

Author's Note

this is for the contest 'concise'. although it reminds me of how i used to feel, how to some point i still feel. no one deserves to be empty.

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

We all have a void we hope to fore fill.
Nice work.