Aurora

i would like to read more if you ever decide to write more for this....i enjoyed it.

Posted 14 Years Ago

the dragon sound almost sad and gentle, like he/she/it knows the farmer's pain
it would be nice to be able to read more of this story

Posted 14 Years Ago

Awesome, thank you guys for the wonderful comments. :)
I have actually just recently been working with this story and
have formed a pretty solid storyline to go along with this
prologue! I've been writing away, maybe I'll post the first chapter tonight
for you guys to read.

P.s. There is nothing evil behind the dragons eyes. If anything its more of a wisdom and sadness like my last reviewer pointed out.

Posted 14 Years Ago

i would love to hear more to this piece i think it is really good

Posted 14 Years Ago

Too bad you never got around to writing more. This sounds like the good beginning for something, if not exactly as you planned. A very good, to-the-point start, and an interesting entrance. Really good read, if a little short. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago

A poetic introduction, to what could be an interesting and imaginative story. I could not help wondering if the name "Stella", had any special significance for the writer? The loss of the farmer's child is especially sad, in view of the fact that he is "poor". But, still a hard worker, no doubt. It would be interesting to read what happens next, to the stolen child and her remaining family.

Your description of the dragon was good, yet ironic, in view of the evil behind those "crystal blue" eyes.....

Thankyou for sharing this with us, "Jewels"!

Posted 14 Years Ago