Everytime You Touch My Hand

Everytime You Touch My Hand

A Poem by Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Every time I feel alone,

Alone in the darkness,

There's a hand that reaches out

It's your hand that makes me stand,

Stand every time I fall

 

Every time you touch my hand

I feel like I'm safe in any harm

Safe 'cause your hand is holding tight on mine

Tightness that I will keep holding on

Holding on until the end

 

Every time you touch my hand,

I feel the warmth of your love

Your love that keeps my faith strong

Strength that I feel when you're here,

Faith that I feel every time you touch my hand.


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Oct 15, 2010


 

© 2010 Jas Alejandrino Ramos


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Eka
Oh my God! Just the way that your emphazied and powered a smiple gesture as touching a hand is magnificent! I love the simplicity but yet complexity of this poem, especially the last line. "Faith that I feel everytime you touch my hand" was just the right kind of spice in my chicken nood soup. (I love analogies)! Please keep writing it was a great pleasure to read this piece, the emotion of the whole thing was astounding. So are you really in love with someone? :) Hehe

♥E

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This is so beautiful this poem every time you touch my hand.

Dalebear

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Awe how nice like a one touch, one word, one look, and you knew. Keep it up excellente.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really lovable work... beautiful...

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such devotion written well is wonderful!
A beautiful poem love!
A great portrayal of the warmth of love!
xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sincere, and to the point. The repetition in this is actually effective in portraying what you're actually trying to say. Good job.
-Yin

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Eka
Oh my God! Just the way that your emphazied and powered a smiple gesture as touching a hand is magnificent! I love the simplicity but yet complexity of this poem, especially the last line. "Faith that I feel everytime you touch my hand" was just the right kind of spice in my chicken nood soup. (I love analogies)! Please keep writing it was a great pleasure to read this piece, the emotion of the whole thing was astounding. So are you really in love with someone? :) Hehe

♥E

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful : ) This is definetly one of my favorites : ) Very nice job

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very lovley poem. The way its written sounds just perfect. (:

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful. I like the tempo how it offsets purposely at times

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

charming~lovely heartfelt piece~

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Added on September 12, 2010
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Tags: jhaszachery, love poems, poetry, in-love

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Jas Alejandrino Ramos
Jas Alejandrino Ramos

Pampanga, Philippines



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I am a Bachelor of Arts in Communication graduate who loves to write poems and novels...I have also a passion for interior designing. more..

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