You're My Saving Grace

You're like an angel,
An angel that has been sent from above,
That has sent for me to guide me,
Guide and care for me through all my life

You're the missing piece in every puzzle,
The missing piece in my heart,
The missing piece that I will always keep searching for,
For you are a part of my life that can't live without with

You're the mystery in every case,
A great mystery of why I love you so,
A great mystery that unveils the truth,
The truth that you're my saving grace.

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Awards

The Cherub Angel

Sept. 18, 2010

• Angels
• You're My Saving Grace

Reviews

[Miss Coral]

*been* sent from above
The repetition segway from one line to another can be used for emphasis quite well, but when you use it in an entire poem, it makes the entire piece feel repetitive. What you have written here is very nice, but it's overshadowed by that repetition- it dominates the piece, and feels like it takes up half of your words. The kind of repetition you have in the last stanza is very good, and works very well, but it can be overused sometimes. Other than that, I think this was very good- very sweet words and nice use of language.

-Coral-

[Dalebear]

I enjoyed this piece of writing

[JENY]

Fantasic…
Very sincere expressions….
Enjoyed the piece of writing…
Very much

might you denoted this poem to special one that helped you very much

good context, but needs better structure. and you use words repetitively.
otherwise great poem.

[Boantlers]

I love this. I feel like I can relate to it on many levels. Its a very clearly described piece of heart.
Lovely.

[Vicky Zhuang Yi-Yin]

great job, just some issues here.
1. Third line, first verse. That has BEEN sent for me to guide me
2. Fourth line, second verse. For you are a part of my life that I can't live without makes more sense.
Other than that, it was really sincere and honest. Good job. I hope you didn't mind me being picky with the choice of words here. 2 is just a suggestion, 1 is a real issue though.
But still good job!
-Yin

[nono]

This is good like the song. Ah nice job! I like this it's wonderful!!!!!!

[Dana Kathryn]

Sweet and Loving poem,very uplifting!

[Jonathan De Elvira]

hurm......hurm......hurm.....
good....
better that so call "angel" last forever though..or else...