......The words......

......The words......

A Poem by Jibin

What ever be the reasons hurts me in this world,
It's all the untold words left in my heart... ... 
            Well,
Now i realize...,
The words were  all about you......

© 2011 Jibin


Author's Note

Jibin
It's my first poetry work..

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short but deep. struck a chord.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Sometimes the shortest writes are the most powerful.. This is beautifully written.. "The words were all about you"...perfect...x

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great work. Esoteric.

Posted 12 Years Ago


short, sweet, and really good. It has good emotion to it. Good job on your first write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent. My first was short and sweet also

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple, short but really beautiful and straight to the point! ! Its amazing for a first poem! Please write on! Its definitely great, you've potential! I love the dots on the ending, makes it so thoughtful!
Nice Written!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and beautiful . . . I love it! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Simple and beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


love it...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Jibin
Jibin

India



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Well, about me!!!! He he he... :) I'm Jibin from India., i'm just 18 years old guy. Always trying to figure out myself, and to find some joy from this f*****g life.... :( But the question is t.. more..

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