The Precious

The Precious

A Poem by Jibin
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How can i believe in world's most seven wonders, while my friends are here, still with me.... I just dedicate this work for them.....

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I don't know when i started this,

Journey of mourning.

All over this journey,

I met so many friends...

 

Some of them always tried to

Pretended them selves...

Some of them never tried 

To understand themselves.

 

Somebody made me sick 

And mad, and they fallen

Over me again and again,

I never felt any angry towards them, 

But I poured with tears

 

I found many of my companions

Left me alone and given up 

Hurting and pains

In every turn of my life,

 

I consoled my self that.

I don't worth all those things.

And I kept watching them,

Walking away from me.

 

And finally i found some

Greatness in my friend's eyes,

And i don't know how much

Precious they were in my life.

 

They showed me, how different 

This world was, and

How much funs were here,

When we were together

 

As my life proceeds with the

Pains i fetched up earlier,

It’s again felts that they were also

Going to leave me alone in this world 

 

And now am left here, all alone.

With those memories, prayers,

And some goodbyes,

They left for me...........

© 2011 Jibin


Author's Note

Jibin
I don't know why i done this, I'm not sure about this work....

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Jibin this is write from the soul for sure and I think it one of the best you have done i felt this one

Posted 10 Years Ago


Lovely poem!! Very emotional. I am touched. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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a lovely ode to friendship ultimately - though the pain of loneliness at the loss - but some can leave a mark on you forever - nice write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


love even from a friend when lost leaves a mark. you express yourself very well here.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Peace

Posted 10 Years Ago


feeling all alone and finding great friends to help one through, I sense a yearning to be with those friends again.

Posted 10 Years Ago


There are such raw, intense emotions here, Sadness, anger, loneliness. Sometimes friends aren't what we need them to be. My wish for you is that you find friend who are always there for you.

Posted 10 Years Ago


so beautiful... friendships bring sadness sometimes but most of all HAPPINESS :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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