She-rewritten

She-rewritten

A Poem by Isimbabi
"

Who is she

"
Written by me

She is beautiful
She smiles
She's got love in
Her eyes
She's classy
She's kind
She's a friend
She's mine

Her eyes, crystal
Her teeth, white
Lips, pink
And her small jaw,
Well proportioned
Not tall,
But her spirit is


Her heart
Deep and warm
Her honesty,
Unquestioned.
She's lovely,
To you and I
Regardless of,
Who she loves.


She is love
She is beauty
She's a queen
She's mine
She's a gem
The only one of all.

© 2016 Isimbabi


Author's Note

Isimbabi
A verse added and another tweaked

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very well expressed, good writing

Posted 3 Years Ago


Isimbabi, I feel this is a huge improvement. Are you able to see the depth that is added with the addition of the imagery you have inserted? Well done!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Isimbabi

4 Years Ago

I also feel it improved the poem. Thanks for reading and most of all reviewing.

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Added on June 13, 2016
Last Updated on June 13, 2016
Tags: She, her, mine, friend, rewrite

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Isimbabi
Isimbabi

Nigeria



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A collection of the writings that I'd allow anyone see. I don't know if I'm a creative writer or even a good one but I'm going to keep on, because... what could I loose more..

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