Modern Mythology

depression

When last with life,when life was lived,without respons--ibility,
without worry,without a thought,what life could bewhen lived without.
       Now, 
like ch ld       i           hood    ,  th      ose                   mon tagem e m   o r  i e s  ou r       modern   myth-      -ol o   gy,ou r       modern

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Reviews

[LazerRays]

Well tbh, the format and set up of the texts make it kinda hard to read. It'd be better if it were normal texted or somehow made easier to read :P I do love the poem and the message it conveys! It's really nice and te type of poetry I like. Believe me, I'm very picky about my poetry and this is great.

[Kibbles and Quips]

Howdy! I am glad you enjoyed the poem!

The format is very much intentional in that regard--it's part of the message and purpose of the work--but regardless, I appreciate your honest input.

Thanks for reading and happy you enjoyed it!
Kenn

[light and ashes]

I like the way you write. I even like your set up. Sometimes life does seem too difficult.