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Heart tree;

Heart tree;

A Poem by Jimi Brady
"

Seeing signs and leaving lines in the tree leaves.

"
Lo,
Her of dark framed hair and
Eyes alight, green brown and bright
Like lips inclined to mine and
Hands entwined, never looking behind and
Lo,
The golden web drawn in intricate thread
Between leaves of dark and red and
Carved, etched in the air and 
Skyborn droplets of water above our heads and
Lo,
You and I
Lain in a bundle ‘neath the heart tree
Wrapped in a smile and a sigh,
The light of us reflected in the web, the leaves,
In our time of need - 
Take the time to find you and me.

© 2013 Jimi Brady


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Watched your video, and I was highly impressed, so I thought I'd come to check out your poetry. (I read them like the lyrics to a song.) I write music myself. (Compositions really.)

But anywho, I really really liked this. It has a message--it's not just a mess of words on the computer screen, and definitely doesn't follow your modern artist, yet your music AND writing are still highly appealing. Well done. I'll admit I'm a bit jealous--the good jealous--of your talents! Haha. Which is a difficult 'feat.

Well done,
--Christoph Poe

99/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Beautiful

Posted 8 Years Ago


does read like lyrics of a song...really good wording and wonderful rhythm...
"like lips inclined to mine"

wish i had written that.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Watched your video, and I was highly impressed, so I thought I'd come to check out your poetry. (I read them like the lyrics to a song.) I write music myself. (Compositions really.)

But anywho, I really really liked this. It has a message--it's not just a mess of words on the computer screen, and definitely doesn't follow your modern artist, yet your music AND writing are still highly appealing. Well done. I'll admit I'm a bit jealous--the good jealous--of your talents! Haha. Which is a difficult 'feat.

Well done,
--Christoph Poe

99/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jimi Brady
Jimi Brady

Riverside, CA



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