Cold Kisses

Cold Kisses

A Chapter by Mystic_Angel
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A sequel to "The cold loves me"

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It was a slightly chilly day in December when a cold breeze came through my window. 'Cold' I see a man figure start forming near the window.
"What is it now Cold?"
Silence. 
"I need you."
"Why?"
"I told you that you are the only one in this cold world of mine that is warm."
I walk closer toward him knowing that it might kill me. I see slightly up his cloak and see his features. Deep blue eyes and dark black hair and pale skin.'Now I know why people say things are beautiful in the winter. I pull his hood off his head and ask, "Is this your human form?" 
"Yes.Do you like it? I can be your race if you would like." (I`m African American) 
"No, no this is fine.You know Cold to say I was born in March, which is suppose to be a warm month, I am always cold and I think I know why now." 
He looks at me questionaly. "I am starting to accpet you." I smile and he returns it.
"I came here to warn you."
"Warn me? About what?"
"Heat" Heat was Cold`s older brother. I always liked heat but he always took it too far by overstaying his welcome when you accept him, he was a jerk, but Cold wasn`t like him.
"When is he coming?" 
"Like you said some time in March."
"So after my birthday I won`t see you?" 
"You will but only at night. I need to be going to Russia now." He pulled his hood back on and turned to leave but stop. He gives me a kiss on the cheek and goes back out the window as the mist he came as.I put a hand to my cheek, its cold but to say it was a cold kiss I could still fee the warmth of his soft lips on my cheek. 


© 2012 Mystic_Angel


Author's Note

Mystic_Angel
I might do more sequels so let me know if I should

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That was cool! I like how you evolved it from the first part to this one!

You did have two spelling oops... "He looks at me questionaly. "I am starting to accpet you." I smile and he returns it." "Questioningly" and "Accept"

Other than that it was really good!

Aaron =)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Mystic_Angel

11 Years Ago

this is why writer`s cafe needs a spell check lol
Wolfwind

11 Years Ago

If you're writing from a PC of some sort, WC usually access the computers spell check program automa.. read more
...pretty good, good story line.:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Write more! This is adorable!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

Just did :) i like how you switched from poem to prose. I'm really not sure if I have cold or heat. .. read more
Mystic_Angel

11 Years Ago

#teamcold or #teamheat?
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

Hmm... for this I'd say #teamcold. I love the cold ;)
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D'aaaawwww *squeals madly* That was tooo cute!!!!!! ^-^ Cold sounds yummy ;) lol XD Great story! I loved it! And yes, heat overpowers lol Cold had to go Russia, that was good :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


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11 Years Ago

Yes! :)
Mystic_Angel

11 Years Ago

#teamcold or #teamheat?
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11 Years Ago

im sooo teamheat ;)

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Added on December 28, 2012
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Natchez, MS



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I have been writing random fan-fiction for anime/manga for over a year, I even tried making a few original ones. Now I want to branch out and try new things like poetry and short stories. I enjoy watc.. more..

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