Love is a Hurricane

Love is a Hurricane

A Poem by Joan*Eckhart

I was captured
The moment I saw your face.
Beautiful,
You appeared to be.
But, you were a hurricane.
You nearly ruined me.





© 2012 Joan*Eckhart


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How sad to be at the receiving end, very nicely penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

7 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words.
Sad yet awesome poem! It was short and sweet, and that's just the way it needs to be. It doesn't need to be longer. I love the emotion and the last sentence just left me in total awe. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by, Dark Knight.
Poignant short flowing write.striking imagery

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
It may be short, but it doesn't need to be any longer when the words are arranged so beautifully. Sort of captures the way love is so simple yet intricate at the same time. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
I can relate this. Sometimes love drains you. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you for dropping by.
Simple, short, meaningful. Nothing at all could have made it better!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
Short and sweet, with lots of meaning =D

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you! This is actually the first poem I've written in years. I kinda just threw it out there. :.. read more
sigh...love does this to me too. Short but so accurate somehow. It makes me want to apologize, well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I actually wondered whether it was too short, but just left it. I'm glad I did.
I, Rene

8 Years Ago

it's perfect as is.

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Added on December 28, 2012
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Tags: Love, Romance

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