Midnight Kiss

Midnight Kiss

A Poem by Joan*Eckhart
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This came to me last night when I was half-asleep. It was a very strange night indeed. Oh yeah, happy new year everyone! Hope 2013 is a joyous one.

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I stand,
Underneath the sapphire night sky,
Lit with diamonds.
Waiting.
I watch,
them light the way home.

I wait,
I wait,
For you, my love.

I have become,
A shadow in the night.
Waiting,
Waiting,
For you, my love.

Crooked hope,
Deceitful vows,
These are the gifts,
You gave me.

Haunt me, ghost.
I want to feel your kiss.
One more time.

Ours,
Is a curious fairy tale.

Yet,
I still wait for you.
I wait.
I will wait,
Forever.

© 2013 Joan*Eckhart


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Enjoyed...this makes me think of internet relationships...some are fantasies and some are real...Rose

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
the pace grips and compels, lovely writing, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by.
I find this poem to be quite intriguing...I see the romantic aspects as an implication of your love for the natural beauty of the night.

"Haunt me, ghost.
I want to feel your kiss.
One more time."
In a way, I see these lines to be quiet haunting. This is a nice touch, because sometimes the night can seem foreboding.

Excellent write. Loved your interpretation of a beautiful part of nature.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)

8 Years Ago

:)
The willingness to overlook the little wrongs is a hallmark of love. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by.
OTownPete

8 Years Ago

No problem, perhaps you'll return the favor.
Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Sure thing. :)
Great images here. Nature is so inspiring and romantic. Love this! :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
So much passion in this, and a few of the lines makes me want to hitch up my skirt and run in the opposite direction, but I will will read on. Beautifully written, and sounds like something I would have written too.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Writing poems isn't really my forte, but I'm so happy you enjoyed it so much. Thanks for reading.
I, Rene

8 Years Ago

My pleasure.
that was nicee ..
and hey happy new year :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Joan*Eckhart

8 Years Ago

Thank you. I hope you have a great one too.

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Added on December 31, 2012
Last Updated on January 2, 2013
Tags: Love, Romance, Anguish
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