space bound.

on the edge of the cliff, she’s staring at me

as i take another hit, i’m just trying to be happy
i pull out my lighter

my heart set on fire, full of burning desire

the symphony in my head is fulfilled by the choir

my soul awakened, my spirit is soaring

running across the planets, gliding across the sky

it’s stunning, riding my enormous blue butterfly

i’m on the moon, blasting to my favorite tune

then i hear her speak as she pops my balloon

suddenly i’m crashing, the chimes in my mind are flashing

eventually i reach the surface, was it on purpose?

getting so damn high just to crash into the ground

i wonder if i close my eyes, will i then again be space bound?

Reviews

[Murderous Alien]

i thought this was amazing and very well written! your wording in this is fantastic and really helps creates a good mental image.

[Esa Ray]

Love this! :) It's as if my heart is racing. Creative use of words with every turn. Great imagery, too and the feels... Keep writing!

[aspen]

this is so beautifully written, i love the imagery and rhymes

[mariam]

SUPER WONDERFUL AND HONEST
GREAT FEELING
GREAT RYTHM AND RYME