Your not coming back

Your not coming back

A Poem by Johanna
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A poem about the worst pain there is, the pain of loosing someone close to you.

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The room is cold, and so empty

I hurry to close the window

I touch the old, photo you gave me

Of you when you were little

 

I cross the floor, and sit down

On the chair you always used to sit on

The wooden door still carries your nightgown

It doesn´t know that your gone

 

I light a candle to feel warmer

It doesn´t help much...

The stuff I told you to move

Still lies in the corner

I´m longing for your touch

 

Your voice, your laugh

Can´t believe your never coming back!

It must be a bad dream, a nightmare

Maybe when I wake up you´ll be here

Beside me, sleeping on your pillow

Cause you promised

You promised you´d never go

 

I stand up to make some coffee

Take two cups out of the cabinet

Then I remember, your not drinking with me

Almost loose my breath

 

Is this over yet?

How could you forget, what you promised

I thought it was true, now how can I forget you?

You knew, you knew

I needed someone to come home to

Not just anyone, I need you

You are never coming home...

How could you leave me here alone?

 

I lay down in my bed, lay done on your side

try to close my eyes

Pictured your face, looking down from the sky

then I cried

I don´t want time! I just want your hand in mine

your hand, so soft

I look at my ring, the ring I´m never taking off

I´m never gonna take it off.

© 2013 Johanna


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A beautiful and sad poem. Desire stayed with us. We wish for things lost for a long time. I like the story in the poem and the strong ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Johanna

6 Years Ago

Thankyou for your nice review :) I´m glad you liked it!
Johanna
Ahhhhh.very touchable write.......i loved so many stanzas but one has ripped me

I stand up to make some coffee
Take two cups out of the cabinet
Then I remember, your not drinking with me
Almost loose my breath

very deep thinking here.......i saw your expression how you did. you have great passion towards him, but he's comin' back he has already taken your breathe and now you're for him but he's not comin'g back don't knnow why.....but you love him much.....you've mentioned what you felt about him.........beautiful written, powerful write.........

i'm gonna read you some more stuffs.....
have this frm my heart for you 98.7/100 :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Johanna

6 Years Ago

Thankyou so much! Means a lot :)
very sad heartfelt peace and very well written :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Johanna

6 Years Ago

Thanks :)
cimmy wuv xxxooo

6 Years Ago

ur welcome hun
This write enforces me to cry, cry and cry on where i sit. I can feel what you want to day or what you;ve already said, this write seemed my fav. one because you really made me emotional and you jotted this write from your painful or HBK heart.
nicely penned, idea to write i can't ask from where get came because such kinda piece only comes from reality and reality and i love suck kinda writes much which comes from reality and shows some mirror of life.
well penned.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Johanna

6 Years Ago

Thankyou :) Your so nice! Glad you enjoyed the poem. Have a nice day :)
Johanna

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