Fear

Fear

A Poem by Johanna
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Read about WWII before I went to bed..and I just can´t fall asleep, so I wrote this..

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FEAR

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Read about WWII before I went to bed..and I just couldn´t fall asleep, so I wrote this..
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I look calm
But I´m screaming inside

It is loud
They forced silence to hide

It was beautiful
But all the flowers died

I might look like a soldier with a country to save
But I´m not brave, I´m not brave

I might be standing with my head high
Like I allready forgot and forgave

But I´m really running

Fear is coming
Fear is coming

© 2014 Johanna


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I was surprised by the power of this piece, so simple and yet the first 3 stanzas especially moved me. I'm glad our generation doesn't have to worry so much about war, at least in Norway and Canada. However, we have a duty to remember history and understand both war and love, to really understand reality and the human condition.

Posted 9 Years Ago


WritersRankings

9 Years Ago

I hope you enter more poems ... (:
Johanna

9 Years Ago

I will :) I´ll start looking out more for your competions, I´m not so good at finding those but I�.. read more
WritersRankings

9 Years Ago

Well the link is on my profile.
You are really good at what you do hun

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou :) I love writing so I´m glad haha
As someone who's delved quite deeply into WWII, I had high expectations and this did not disappoint. Great job! I saw a movie called 'Stalingrad' quite recently( It's based on the Battle of Stalingrad) and you captured the soldier's emotions perfectly. You should watch it if you get the time, I think you'll like it. Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


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Johanna

10 Years Ago

I do that too! in my freetime which people find strange.. but it´s an intense interesting time peri.. read more
Devesh

10 Years Ago

Exactly! People find it really strange but it really is so interesting! I loved it! :) Yes, it is sa.. read more
fear is our enemy and sin, try to get rid about it. very nice you described your fear...
World war was a nightmare which we don't want to see.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou for your thougts and review :)
Saddam

10 Years Ago

you are welcome dear.
Fear is a powerful emotion or a state of mind...I like the powerful honesty in this write...:)..................

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

I´m glad you liked it :) thankyou for reading :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...Any time...:).................
This is so brutal honesty, loved it J

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Amos :) Your so kind! always reviewing, thankyou so much for taking time to read my work, m.. read more
The title fit in really well. This is an awesome write! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou :) Glad you liked it :)
I understand. I feel the same. Nicely written.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou :))
Yeah this piece is really great. Its easy how WWII influenced something like this. The title 'Fear' is also very appropriate for this poem. Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou :) I´m glad the title fits! I always have a hard time figuring out the titels.. but this o.. read more
max_vonnegut

10 Years Ago

Your are welcome! I understand how that goes haha
Johanna this was so amazing. Great job with this. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Johanna

10 Years Ago

Thankyou Maggie :))
❤ Maggie ❤

10 Years Ago

You're welcome! :)

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Added on January 28, 2014
Last Updated on February 5, 2014
Tags: Calm, Inside, Silent, Loud, Save, Brave, soldier, Forgive, Still, Fear, Coming

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Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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