Over

 

Over

It´s over

What does that word portray?

 

Even when it´s over

The love doesn´t go away

 

You could say

That it´s over

I could say

That I heard

 

No matter what you call it

It´s only a word

 

Over

It´s over

Let´s go tell the world a lie

 

Even when it´s over

I still won´t say goodbye

Author's Note

Let me know what you think :)

Reviews

[David]

This is good, I enjoyed reading it

[Johanna]

good haha :) thanks

[Blue]

So lovely, Johanna. You captured the emotion as easy as you inhale.

[Johanna]

Your so kind Arzel! Thankyou so much :))

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is a powerful, truthful, emotional and deep piece.
I love the whole meaning of this hun. Its very true its over there only two words although the relationship could still not really and truly be over.
Well written hun i enjoyed this :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou :) Glad you did hon :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome hun :)

[Shaquana Adams]

Even when it´s over
The love doesn´t go away

Very impactful. I love it. Great poem :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou :)

[Avinash]

When we are in love more than the person who we love ; its the way that person make you feel in love with yourself. The person is gone nevertheless the love and you both stay on...and if we are able to put this feeling into perspective we are unlikely to feel pain for anyone leaving us alone.

[Johanna]

Nicely reflected, true, thankyou Avinash :)

[Ai Lun]

Very simple, but beautifully effective! Great work :)

[Johanna]

Thankyou Aaron :)

[Marcus]

I could relate to this, nicely written. I enjoyed, keep it up.

[Johanna]

I´m glad, thankyou :) I will

[Devesh]

You're clearly a person of few words. The few that you do write, precious. It's beautiful in it's simplicity, yet devastatingly powerful. Thanks for posting, you did a great job! Turn this into a song! :)

[Johanna]

Wow thankyou Devesh! :) Yes.. I´m thinking about doing it.. glad you liked it! :)

[Devesh]

You're welcome! Don't forget to post the link to the song when you're done. :)

[Elina]

A very simple, beautiful poem. Nicely written, Johanna.

[Johanna]

Thankyou Elina :)

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

Johanna, I feel like every poem of yours I read, I like more and more. Like. This was so good. I love this so much. Great job!

[Johanna]

Yey :)) I´m happy, thankyou Maggie :)

[❤ Maggie ❤]

You're welcome! :)