A beautiful poem. I like the way you write. Your gentle pen allow the reader to feel the emotion and the loss for not attempting. The poem flow was perfect. You led the reader to a sad ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thankyou again Coyote :)) so happy you like my poetry!
This was so heartfelt and sad, but it held much deep meaning to it. It's not easy to like someone who you can't have or who doesn't like you in the same way, but it's life. As long as that person still makes you happy and keeps you stable through the day, that's all that really matters, I feel. It's okay to still feel the same about them, no one says you have to forget about them right away. You can always take your time to bask in their memories :)
I´ve started to post most of my poems on my facebook poetry page instead. If you like my work, feel free to check it out: https://www.facebook.com/johannamagdalenapoetry?_rdr=p
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