Maybe I know

Maybe I know

A Poem by Johanna
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Diary of the heart.. I don´t know.. the words just spilled out.. didn´t know how to make it into a structured poem so I just left it as it was

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You said you were so happy to know me

But do you really know me?

Sometimes I don´t even know myself

You said you were so glad that we were free

But are we really free?

This world has made it hard to tell


and I don´t wanna wake up tomorow

Heavyhearted

Before the day has even started

Pushing back my sorrow

Because it doesn´t make sense

Do things ever make sense?


Maybe I know that I don´t belong here

Maybe I know that I´ll always be on the outside

Why is it so? am I just too scared?

Too confused, all the white lies

Maybe I know that I can´t tell what love is

Maybe I know there will always be something amiss

Maybe I know that all good things end

Maybe I know that new things begin

Maybe I know that I can´t lose hope

Cause what do we have then?

© 2014 Johanna


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Such a beautiful piece with so many questions to be answered. Great job!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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MAC
a nicely done write giving us a raw view into a moment of life. excellent!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou Mark! :)
Nice imagery. Life`s surrounded by uncertainties so, we are locked into the shells of it. But the word "May Be" always work for the best!! I enjoyed reading your poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wórdsmíth

9 Years Ago

Oh ok, I got it and hey, thanks for suggesting me some names of your stories, it`s very helpful to m.. read more
Johanna

9 Years Ago

I really like literature..and read a not, I´m gonna be a journalist and a reporter, start studing t.. read more
Wórdsmíth

9 Years Ago

Sounds good. Journalist and a Reporter? Impressive. I like Journalists, they`ve got some great sense.. read more
Very raw and heartfelt emotions. A lot of good questions to ponder.Excellent..:)...............

Posted 9 Years Ago


I loved this you gave some hope in this write to those whom feel the same, I will say I am one. Thank you for sharing :)))))))))))))

Posted 9 Years Ago


My favorite lines:
I don´t wanna wake up tomorow
Heavyhearted
Before the day has even started
Pushing back my sorrow
Because it doesn´t make sense
Do things ever make sense?

Although I think the last stanza should be worked on a lil bit by omitting some "May be's".

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Hm.. yeah I was a little unsure about the last one.. do you have a sentence in mind? Didn´t quite g.. read more
hope is the essence of strength to revival for this desperate situation. i like the imagery that you express among the words. i think there a miss type at the line "Because it dosen´t make sense", maybe you want to write "because it doesn't make sense". thanks for share :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Johanna
Johanna

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