Never say hi

Never say hi

A Poem by Johanna
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Two in one day.. I know.. but I´ve made a really great friend who inspired me<3

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Never say hi

Never say hallo

Don´t you remember

Don´t you know

That we threw stones

and built a wall

So thick I can't hear you anymore


Never say hi

Never say hallo

Watch how much despair can grow

It´s covering the wall that we made

I never forgave

That I must confess

But now our world is soundless


Never say hi

Never say hallo

I won't say it back

I heard my heart break

After you said goodbye

and I heard nothing after that

© 2014 Johanna


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Damn... This is good... This is so good... I can't even tell you how good this is.... Tres Beaux

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

best review I´ve gotten haha :D thankyou :))
A powerful piece about heartache and trusting of others. This one delivers like a punch to the stomach, a slap across the face!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much! :)
A raw emotion in the piece lets the reader wonder and embrace the wording, well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

thankyou Thomas :)
Such painful rhythm and rhyme... the letting go... moving further down life's path alone... Felt the sadness of it overwhelm me...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou Craig, I´m glad the poem reaches people
Aww... it`s very sad. I know that feeling when someone says, "Goodbyes" .. eh.. worst moments of life. Your poem`s beautiful & written with the depth of your heart. Keep it up my friend! ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Lots of emotion penned here... there's some good imagery (i can readily picture a wall- and also you and the other on opposite sides of the wall silently wishing the other will say hello)... good work J

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou so much :) -J
Its sadly beautiful, short but expressive and to the point.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

thankyou :)
I know excectly what you are going through and I can tell you from experience it is better to talk to the person than ignoring. So go and talk it out!
:)
CDB

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou for the review :)
Carl Drake Barnard

9 Years Ago

My pleasure :)
Emotional defenses in full force when someone who has hurt in past tries to make you trust him again. Not gonna happen with someone as strong and beautiful like you and who knows how to respect her feelings.
Enjoyed this write of defiance.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

Thankyou for your kind words :)
Its great to find one person who insipres you to write...lucky you! Enjoyed the read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Johanna

9 Years Ago

It really is :) Thankyou Amos :) Have a good day today :)

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Added on September 2, 2014
Last Updated on September 3, 2014
Tags: Never, hi, hallo, soundless, world, wall, grow, hear

Author

Johanna
Johanna

Norway



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