Moving On.

Moving in on is hard after heartbreak but something we all must do after we realize they DONT love you any more.

Every moment.
Every day.
I think of you.
Gone away.

Every second.
Every hour.
I am held.
Still in your power.

You don't love me.
That is plain.
Every heart beat.
I feel the pain.

How can I?
Get over you.
Rebuild my life.
Start a new.

Moving on.
Is hard to start.
Pick up the pieces.
Of my broken heart.

You don't love me.
That is plain.
On with life.
Not the same.

Keep on smiling.
I must do.
Take the test.
Learn from you.

Try real hard.
Work my best.
Sing out loud.
Get you off my chest!

Reviews

[Onku Ghosh]

You have experienced a recent heart break......your poem tells it all.Very beautifully, you have got her of your chest.Wonderful write and read !!!!!!

[TrimarcoRansome]

That torturous agony no pill nor bandage can mend, penned perfectly

[Brandon Langley]

This perfectly captures the essence of heartbreak and how we try to overcome it, this is truly beautiful, there is nothing more to say but to applaud you on your great work and to wish you luck with moving on, it can be hard at times, I know, but it always happens, whether we fill the gap, drudge on, or distract ourselves from it, we always get over it

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Its 8 months now.......doesnt hurt as bad but it still hurts and always will i guess.

[Brandon Langley]

I feel for you...

[Sweets]

This is very sad and painful, hope you get over your breakup as soon as possible

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Its a long hard road.

[Steven Cash]

Aw I feel for you John

[Mia]

Reading this is literally like reliving heart break all over again! You captured it perfectly. Painful but beautiful, very beautiful.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Painful for me to read this now moving on has been hard....

[Mia]

After most struggles there is a reward but after the struggle of moving on there isn't any. There is just an empty place where someone used to be.

[alice]

This hits me hard. I'm going through this heartbreak thing againd, third time, but this time it hurts the most.
This is going into my library.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Its so tough but hopefully we all learn something.

[MOON]

Poignant write , painful . You expressed so well and the flow great.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Tearful to look back on this......

[rnuff]

I totally love this, somtimes are worth saying. Awesome

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

I cried a river writing this....

[rnuff]

i could imagine.

[lothlorienwriter]

John glad you got this off your chest but its not up to your other work in my opinion!
Get on with the book stop thinking ABOUT HER!! Me and others want Chapter 2!
If you feel the need to write a poem make sure its on one of your "characters!"

[John Phoenix Hutchinson.]

Ha chapter 4 on its way