In The Dark

Don't be scared, you're in the dark

Without the brightness of the moon,

Nor the shimmering stars

No one can see you,

But the spirits of the night

No one will hear you,

You're out of sight

 

Just close your eyes

And don't you dare peek

While the spirits of Death Valley

Lurks as you sleep

Whispering, manifesting, communicating...

For them to be seen

Waiting, waiting, waiting...

Hungry for your midnight screams

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Hannah Berry]

Wow this is heavy, but i really like it. The sense of doom and gloom is almost overwhelming haha. I can visualize the frightened being and it's really sad but so so good.

[❤ Maggie ❤..]

I agree with Krista, this is pretty creepy, but awesome!!! :)

[Krista Weiss]

Reallllllllly creepy!! Great job! haha :)

[AdorableDreams]

I love dark poetry, this is amazing.