A Poem by Riley

So yea... Not sure how this is going to turn out. Just coming up with it off the top of my head.


Dancing in the rain

Spinning round and round

Trying to catch my balance

Im about to hit the ground


Faster and Faster

Like never before

Im letting go of everything

Im opening new doors


Im falling so fast

But you cant see

You're the cause of all my pain

You're the agony in me


Still spinning round and round

Im going out of my mind

So much hurt and confusion

Its ripping me apart inside


The spinning has stopped

Ive landed on the floor

My heart will be shatterd

Ever on, ever more


That was the old day

That was the old me

But im stronger now

More that you will ever see


Im dancing in the rain

Im spinning round and round

But you see im not scared now

No longer frightened of hitting the ground.

© 2008 Riley

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Good peice.


Posted 13 Years Ago

this one is so strong!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Wow, it's amazing how you captured that sense of pain and confusion that is called love. Thanks for writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago

I like this, it's blunt and to the point yet it still leaves some to the imagination. I think a lot of people can relate to this. Kudos Chiley~!

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 27, 2008



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