This is real

This is real

A Poem by Riley

Just an idea that has been in my mind for a while.


Two eyes meet across a crowded room

The connection is almost instant

A smile makes it way apon their lips

For the eyes that have met belong to lovers

A small dark room is their hideaway

The flickering glow of candles, their only light.

A soft melody plays in the background and the two hum along

It all starts with a kiss

Nothing more, nothing less

But behind that kiss there is a passion growing deep inside.

Love, lust, desire, all in one little kiss.

Hands together

Hips pressed agains hips

Wisper to me and say you'll never forget

Their hands are moving franticly

Up and down eachothers bodys

A moan escapes the young girls lips

A small cry of shear ecstasy

Her nails are ripping down his back

This dance of the flesh has made the two into one

One unwind and are two again

The boy looks at his lover with a smile on his face

The smile is returned from the girl.

This is real

This is true love at its finest.

© 2008 Riley

Author's Note

So yea i dont like this very much but the idea has been playing around in my head for a few days now and i needed to get it out. Reviews would be adored

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This is very well expressed. There is nothing like the first time you are with a person. It's a feeling you get only one time with each person, it is very hard to explain. hopefully you know what I am talking about. But anyways good write, I loved it!


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