The Perfect Ending.

The Perfect Ending.

A Poem by Riley

My boyfriend and I watched our first sunset together tonight. This poem was inspired by that.


Pink, orange, puprle, blue.

These colors reflect in your eyes as we lay in eachothers arms.

We watch the sun creep below the horizon.

The sky grows darker as we speak of our love for one another.

A love that can never be broken.

The moon shines with the intensity of our passion.

Stars smile down upon us, dancing around happily.

Your arms are wrapped around me.

An embrace that makes my heart twist and turn, only wishing to be closer to you.

The moon and stars.

Our only light in paradise.

Your heartbeat is the melody that rocks me to sleep.

The day has come to an end in your arms.

A new day waits tomorrow for us.

For our love to grow stronger.

And when I wake tomorrow,

I shall love you even more.




© 2008 Riley

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It was a fun piece to read but you misspelled purple in the first line
Other than that I liked it!
I will read more from you soon
Cheers, lea

Posted 12 Years Ago

this is a beautiful poem, it gives the reader a warm fuzzy feeling! great job.

Posted 12 Years Ago

i can't wait to watch a sunset with my girlfriend. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

This a very lovely romantic poem
how i envy you ive always wanted to
experience a magaical moment like this
hopefully, i will someday with my special guy.
Love the details in your poem.
Thanks for sharing.

Best of wishes for the future in your relationship.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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