Love Me Not?

The question you asked when fate leads you to believe that it may be the answer.

Love me; I'll care about you and only you.

Love me not? The number of women are only a few.

Love me; Feel life's joy and it's glory in your heart.

Love me not? Is for all the time we spent apart?

Love me; Let your soul bath in an ocean of everlasting peace.

Love me not? Why, because I handle you violently?

Love me; The above is not who I am underneath.

Love me not? I can not control who I am when I drink.

Love me; Let the clouds be our bed and the warm sun our blanket.

Love me not? For all the temptation to whom that I gave in?

Love me; Let the world see who has accepted me.

Love me not? Is that's the only option that you left for me?

Author's Note

I wanted to start with something short and small just something to warm up to before going big. I wanted to see how the reviews if any will contribute to me writing or hurt my feeling(chuckles). Either way I hope all who does read enjoy and comment. Than You.

Reviews

[Andie]

Nice one here. It made me think about what was going on in your head when you were writing this. I've read it about five times in a row, and it seems to get more powerful everytime. It was a good first poem to post. Wonderful job.
Welcome to WC by the way. :)

[Jonah V. Syx]

Thank You very much. I really do appreciate your feedback. I hope to see more feedback in the future and enjoyment of your work as well. I am glad you enjoyed it.

[Andie]

It was really no problem at all. A great work like this is never a problem to read, my friend. :)

[Jonah V. Syx]

I will be sure to send you future read request. Thank you.

[Andie]

It would be best if you left me a comment, or sent me a message of whatever you want me to read. I have a little over 800 read request backed up right now. >

[Jonah V. Syx]

Sorry for your burden. I won't add to any of that. If you have time I posted a new one moments ago called Hearts Liar. If you can give it a nice skim.

[Andie]

Really, it would be no problem.
Sure. I'll check it out now.

[Sharon]

It is wonderful. Very descriptive and the repetition gives of a special feeling. It shows the doubts that people have. It is a great poem! Keep sending me requests! :D

[Jonah V. Syx]

Thank you. Still getting use to the site. Your review is very appreciated. I will do that indeed.

[Sharon]

Your welcome. Hope you get used to this site soon! :)

[Jonah V. Syx]

As do I.

[Sharon]

:D