Love Me Not?

Love Me Not?

A Poem by Jonah V. Syx
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The question you asked when fate leads you to believe that it may be the answer.

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Love me; I'll care about you and only you.
Love me not? The number of women are only a few.
Love me; Feel life's joy and it's glory in your heart.
Love me not? Is for all the time we spent apart?
Love me; Let your soul bath in an ocean of everlasting peace.
Love me not? Why, because I handle you violently?
Love me; The above is not who I am underneath.
Love me not? I can not control who I am when I drink.
Love me; Let the clouds be our bed and the warm sun our blanket.
Love me not? For all the temptation to whom that I gave in?
Love me; Let the world see who has accepted me.
Love me not? Is that's the only option that you left for me?

© 2013 Jonah V. Syx


Author's Note

Jonah V. Syx
I wanted to start with something short and small just something to warm up to before going big. I wanted to see how the reviews if any will contribute to me writing or hurt my feeling(chuckles). Either way I hope all who does read enjoy and comment. Than You.

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Nice one here. It made me think about what was going on in your head when you were writing this. I've read it about five times in a row, and it seems to get more powerful everytime. It was a good first poem to post. Wonderful job.
Welcome to WC by the way. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andie

7 Years Ago

It would be best if you left me a comment, or sent me a message of whatever you want me to read. I h.. read more
Jonah V. Syx

7 Years Ago

Sorry for your burden. I won't add to any of that. If you have time I posted a new one moments ago c.. read more
Andie

7 Years Ago

Really, it would be no problem.
Sure. I'll check it out now.



Reviews

Nice one here. It made me think about what was going on in your head when you were writing this. I've read it about five times in a row, and it seems to get more powerful everytime. It was a good first poem to post. Wonderful job.
Welcome to WC by the way. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Andie

7 Years Ago

It would be best if you left me a comment, or sent me a message of whatever you want me to read. I h.. read more
Jonah V. Syx

7 Years Ago

Sorry for your burden. I won't add to any of that. If you have time I posted a new one moments ago c.. read more
Andie

7 Years Ago

Really, it would be no problem.
Sure. I'll check it out now.
It is wonderful. Very descriptive and the repetition gives of a special feeling. It shows the doubts that people have. It is a great poem! Keep sending me requests! :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sharon

7 Years Ago

Your welcome. Hope you get used to this site soon! :)
Jonah V. Syx

7 Years Ago

As do I.
Sharon

7 Years Ago

:D

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Jonah V. Syx
Jonah V. Syx

chicago, IL



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I love to write stories that are filled with what I call creative fiction. Each story is different and unique in it's own way. No two stories are the same, well at least i don't think so. I have tons .. more..

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