You and Me

You and Me

A Poem by Jong Schrijver
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Yes,it's about love,get over it. This poem is true and from the heart

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You've changed my life in more ways
than one
I used to have nothing but now you're
my everything
You're smart and sweet and amazingly
beautiful
You've been my first kiss,first dance
my first true love
I can't possibly think of my life
without you
Because I can't stand to be too far
away from you
And the memories that we have made
are wonderful
Looking into the future I can only see
you and me
Together forever because we are
meant to be<3

© 2010 Jong Schrijver


Author's Note

Jong Schrijver
It might be a little out of rhythm so please don't comment on that,but any other suggestions are welcome:)

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very sweet poem..like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Thanks everyone:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Very sincere. Try adding punctuation to show where the thoughts begin and end especially in this set up of a poem. It is a bit sappy, but that's what love is. Love is being so unafraid of what the world thinks because of your other. I applaud such things in the world.

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Gorgeous poem, I absolutely love it :D

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The rhythm is good. And it's not sappy either, like some love poems. I really like it

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awwwwwwww. The rhythm's actually pretty good. I like the long line, short line pattern.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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