What a Girl

What a Girl

A Poem by Jong Schrijver

It's short and basically to the point. The point being I love her.


There's this girl who I just can't seem to get out of my mind

She is everything a man could ever want or hope to have

Everything about her is beautiful and it makes me wonder,

Why did she choose me, why am I lucky, why pick me?





I love you more than you know, even if it doesn't show

I miss you when I'm not near you, and I'm jealous of who is

And the feeling I get inside whenever I'm around you

I just don't want to screw up and lose you, because I love you.


© 2010 Jong Schrijver

Author's Note

Jong Schrijver
This poem is split into two parts. The first part is just speaking in general and then the second part is speaking to the girl.

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Posted 13 Years Ago

Aww, pure love, so radiant and passionate. I can relate to this cause I'm in love too and I feel the same way. Sheer adoration of the beloved one. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago

very cute. a girl would definitely love this. good job

Posted 13 Years Ago

Very nice writing here.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Posted 13 Years Ago

Aw this is so sweet. There's so much feeling in it. Clever wording, too.
And I don't think you have to worry. You guys are too strong to let anything tear you down.

I hope I'm not jinxing it. O_o

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on July 22, 2010
Last Updated on July 22, 2010
Tags: love, girl, beautiful, everything, because

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