Devoted

My attempt at a haiku........

Looking for some truth

They say it is hard to find

But I won't give up

 

 

 

Author's Note

Review, please. This is my first haiku so please critique.

Reviews

[Gianna Perry]

Not bad, not bad at all. It's actually rather good. Kasey's right about the tone to it. Me gusta.

[Kasey Jones]

This is good. A lot of your poems have this same type of tone, but that just shows that you're a very determined person who won't take any crap. :) Nice job.