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A Poem by Jong Schrijver
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My attempt at a haiku........

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Looking for some truth

They say it is hard to find

But I won't give up

 

 

 

© 2010 Jong Schrijver


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Jong Schrijver
Review, please. This is my first haiku so please critique.

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Not bad, not bad at all. It's actually rather good. Kasey's right about the tone to it. Me gusta.

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is good. A lot of your poems have this same type of tone, but that just shows that you're a very determined person who won't take any crap. :) Nice job.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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