Battlefield

Just a poem invented out of anger. I hope you all enjoy.

I think you’re a horrible person, you don’t deserve to live

Because of all the things you want to do and all the things you did

You always treat me wrong, so at least give me this one wish

Stop being so flirtatious towards others as if I don’t exist

Let’s be fair, you never loved me more, not one day

I’m serious this time when I’m telling you to stay away

You’re not wanted in my life, so leave me alone

Because now everything you say, just cuts me to the bone

You try to be cute, as if you did nothing wrong

But when you’re with your friends, you never seem to play along

This love story is getting old; I want to reach an end

But I’d rather not sit here and hear you say that I hurt you again

You’ve been hurting me for 8 months; suck it up just for this one time

Instead of sitting there accusing me, as if I committed a horrible crime

You always find a way to switch all the problems on me

But that ends tonight; it’s your turn to finally see

To see all the things you did to me, and understand all the things you say

And to understand why it was wrong to leave me and go drink on my own birthday

I just want to let you know that at this point, that the battle remains undone

Love really is a battlefield, but the war has already been won.

 

Author's Note

Just keep in mind that I was angry when writing this. I hope it shows? ^_^

Reviews

[E.j.aka.Hannah]

Dude, bravo. This is awesome. Its really good writing when someone can relate to it. Beautiful work.


And yes...the anger shows. :)

[Tony]

I don't know why, but this is the second one of yours I've read and I keep trying to put like light metal music to it, or maybe heavy acoustic...... I think chicks would dig a song that said stuff like this.
"Ohh....Jordan....your soooo romantic.....*
Seriously though, I like your stuff.