Don't give up

Don't give up

A Poem by Jordan Dickinson

Don't give up, fight till the end
I'll be by your side, always a friend
We will be side by side till morning appears
We'll stand there for when, the victory cheers

We are the army of freedom, death we don't know
We will fight all the day, our banner will flow
We left behind a wife and a strong hearted son
Until this war is over, and victory we won

We have won this battle, the war has come
We will stand hard and strong and never shall run
So come on my brothers sing the victors song
If you don't know the words then just follow along

We are the army of freedom, death we don't know
We will fight all the day, our banner will flow
We left behind a wife and a strong hearted son
Until this war is over, and victory we won

Now remember me brothers death came to show
Please tell my wife and my son they should know
I gave up my life, but the war now is won
My time here has ended, and God knows I'm done

Just know I'll stand next to you until the morning appears
I'll hold up your rifle, and settle your fears
I'm right here beside you just as a friend
I'll stand next beside you until its the end

© 2012 Jordan Dickinson


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Mia
This is very lovely :) I liked it. I'm not big on super rhyming stuff. I feel like emotion and realness can be lost behind sticking to a strict flow...but this was nice, I enjoyed.

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Hey! My name is Jordan Dickinson I am a senior in High School and have an unique fascination with poetry! I hope you enjoy my work!! more..

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