Killing Me

Its killing me,

all the sleepless nights.

I try to dream,

but i can't.

I think of you all night long,

wondering if you think of me too.

Not talking to you,

is killing me.

When i sleep at night,

you are always there.

I need to talk to you, just once.

One night will do me wonders.

Missing you,

is killing me.

All night long i wonder,

if the next day,

i will talk to you.

You make my world go round,

the grass is greener,

and the sun is brighter,

when i talk to you.

And now that i miss you,

my world has gone up in flames,

and its killing me.

 

Author's Note

IGNORE grammar and spelling. thanks.

Reviews

[Nicole]

Wow, that's all I can say. Like, what everyone else said. This is very emotional. I can feel this. You did a good job of showing how you feel. Sometimes it's had for a writer to do that.
Great job, I love this poem. :)
-- Nicole

[Closed Account]

wow. this is heartbreaking, and it shows a lot of emotion. i know what this feels like. this is really good. great job! =)
--Bella

[Stephanie]

That's so heartbreaking :( Really good though. I felt all your pain because I was in love once and I know how this feels. My favorite lines:

"You make my world go round,
the grass is greener,
and the sun is brighter,
when i talk to you.
And now that i miss you,
my world has gone up in flames,
and its killing me."

I hope you get to see her soon :) Great write!