Your the Perfect Dream

Your the Perfect Dream

A Poem by Jordan

Every night,

My mother says,

Go to bed.

But i dont.

Id risk gettting in troule,

or a good night's rest,

if it ment,

that i would get to stay awake,

and talk to the perfect girl.

When i talk to you late at night,

i dont feel tired,

im so busy thinking about you,

i never get a chance to fall sleep.

And i dont need to dream,

because you make my life better than any dream.

© 2009 Jordan


Author's Note

Jordan
ignore grammar and spelling.

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Wow, this great. I really like this. It's kinda like the story that they worked off of the song Love Story.
They could get in trouble for seeing each other. Really romantic. :)

Great job.

--Nicole :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Hey im Jordan. Obioiusly i like to write. Im not so good at writing poems or songs...but i love to write stories and books so i hope u like them. I am 15 and i play soccer, track and golf. My best fri.. more..

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