rap freestyle

A submission for a ricka-ricak-rap contest. haha, I just had fun with this. :D

Don't let the name fool ya; I'm far from humble.

I got intoxicating style that'll make you stumble.

Intricate rhymes are how I do my speakin'

I got flows deeper than British Petroleum leakin'

Young boys, they want to step up and try to test this.

Give it your best shot, son.  I'm restless.

Oops, what I actually mean't to say was "ruthless."

My style got that KO punch; I'll leave your mouth toothless.

If you don't know by now, I keeps it lyrical.

Baby Jesus called, said I'm the new miracle.

I raise the dead and turn the water into wine.

One flick of my wrist, I'll turn your girl into mine.

I know I talk a big game, but I back it up.

Your reign on the top is over, boy, pack it up.

If you see me walking on the street, be sure to run away.

Although these rhymes are funny, I joke but I don't play.

UHHH!!  ..THUG LIFE! (bahaha, jk jk)

Author's Note

A nice way to relax and "spit some flows." haha, Just a side note, I really don't think that high of myself...just went with the flow and thats how it came out. I think I got into the mindset of a person that rap battles. The only problem is that I wasn't battling anyone. haha. Please enjoy my "freestyle."

Reviews

[Sara]

haha, i did enjoy this! this really flows and i can totally imagine somebody (you ;)) winning a rap battle with this... lot of clever lines here i liked -- 'baby jesus called, said i'm the new miracle' is so funny and biting... great job! lol don't compromise your swagger, i say...

[Aswin R Prasad]

This is dope..! Love your humour and the tricky use of words to give a ring to it!
Keep writing .. :)

[LyssaJo]

My name is alyssa and i'm from the hood,
they call me lyssalicious cuz they know i'm good.
they rap about my rhymes
or how i drop a line
them boys they come around
making me sound
like a superfly girl
with ribbons and curls
i'm not the type of girl you see
in the streets
working that corner for some sheets
or the type of girl you see
in the club working that pole
cuz she thinks shes good
i'm the type of girl you see
on the stage
workin that music
like its a new age
music is my life
and i rap good
so call me lyssalicious
cuz you know i'm good!

haha yours is better!

[Tia Sanchez]

I raise the dead and turn the water into wine.
One flick of my wrist, I'll turn your girl into mine.

The funniest bar. LOL. The lyrics were clever and the syllable count helped it flow really well. You should do some more, minus the "Thug Life" thingy at the end. LOL.