Valley Savior (The Primordial Series)

Valley Savior (The Primordial Series)

A Poem by Joshua777

Written Unknown | Can it become the valley savior?


The wall of the valley,

Saw the risk of fire,

He had to make the call,

Bail now,

Or go in for the rescue

And save the lives below.

It was agonizing choice,

But no time for debate.

He had no time.

A flash of white lightning

Whipped the area, then

A burst of fire erupted.

© 2020 Joshua777

Author's Note

Background | A poem written in an "Intro to Poetry" class in 9th grade; the assignment requirements unknown.

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Added on July 31, 2020
Last Updated on July 31, 2020
Tags: valley, threat, savior




I started writing poetry at 14 inside an ‘Intro to Poetry’ class which turned out to be less fun because of the restraints of the assignments, so poetry fell away from me soon after. A .. more..