Where Is Will?

Where Is Will?

A Poem by Solidad
"

A fleeting moment of anger.

"
And you stand out in the rain
waiting on dope dealers to judge you
while you count your pennies 
like a peasant. 

Yet you blindly
take twenties from my hand
as though I've always
owed you.

And like a fool
I stroke your brow
while you gaze out the window
watching your past
like a scenic back drop
on a train ride.

You tell me how beautiful
I am;
but how is that possible
when in eight years
you've never even so much as
looked in my direction
longer than the time
it took me to put
my clothes back on?

But I digress...

After all not everything
is meant to be said aloud.
Especially to those
too hardheaded to listen.

© 2015 Solidad


Author's Note

Solidad
Awkward to read. So just feel it.

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I read and felt as if I had there for the entire relationship.
You have a way of packing a lifetime of experience in few words.
The poem had its moments where it was painful to watch these
two...but your ability to say exactly what you want to say with
pinpoint accuracy amazes me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Solidad

9 Years Ago

It was painful to be a part of but mostly it is a strange feeling to find oneself so angry with thei.. read more


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I read and felt as if I had there for the entire relationship.
You have a way of packing a lifetime of experience in few words.
The poem had its moments where it was painful to watch these
two...but your ability to say exactly what you want to say with
pinpoint accuracy amazes me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Solidad

9 Years Ago

It was painful to be a part of but mostly it is a strange feeling to find oneself so angry with thei.. read more

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