Naked Again

Naked Again

A Poem by JourneyBlu

Naked once again

 

With these scars I cannot hide

 

Time to close the knife

© 2012 JourneyBlu


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Yikes! Was gonna get ready for bed and thought maybe this would be an instructional piece as I always have difficulty with my left sock...
Seriously though, a disturbing piece on "cutting"...all too sad a story, IMO.

Very well written!


Greg :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JourneyBlu

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review....it is a heavy piece. Fortunately not mine own story but that of too many wo.. read more



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Powerful and deep! This to me is as if one looks at themself in the mirror, accepts what is and closes the knife in a symbolic gesture of finding peace with were they have been, and who they have become are as one

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yikes! Was gonna get ready for bed and thought maybe this would be an instructional piece as I always have difficulty with my left sock...
Seriously though, a disturbing piece on "cutting"...all too sad a story, IMO.

Very well written!


Greg :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

JourneyBlu

11 Years Ago

Thanks for the review....it is a heavy piece. Fortunately not mine own story but that of too many wo.. read more

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 Added on August 20, 2012
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JourneyBlu
JourneyBlu

Marion, IA



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I am a mother of four wonderful children. I live in Marion, IA and I write poetry. I just self-published my first poetry book this year titled Whispers of Never. I am currently working on my second bo.. more..

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