Help Me

I feel as everyone is watching me

as I fall deeper into my cavern of darkness

Yet, no one is there

People are judging

But do not help

My voice is silent

but my mind is screaming

Pushing and pulling in all directions 

What do I do?

I know the correct answer

but that isn't always easy

Please help me

I give into my addiction

I can't tell anyone for fear of absence

The only thing I have beaten

is this worn out path of loneliness

I did this to myself

but I can not get out alone

How then?

Can I go on

Paranoia overwhelms me

Reviews

[Vargo]

You managed to paint a very powerful picture and the message is clear. It also leaves the reader with some questions which is good. I wouldn't recommend rhyming for this kind of poem (it's still doable) but some kind of structure is preferred. Either challenge yourself with a set rhythm/syllables (you can even make up your own) or continue exploring euphemisms and play around with the language to make it less like a story (unless that is your purpose).