Pathetic

Pathetic

A Poem by Y.F.
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Another view of people who just won't let go.

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Life goes on, yet you stand still,
waiting for - what never will,
after so much time went by,
after all the tears went dry.

I've moved on, yet here you stand,
reaching out to hold my hand.
Do I dare my mind to speak -
you portray as so damn weak.

That hand I will never hold,
chase another pot of gold.
Only one thing left to say -
let me be, just go away.

© 2010 Y.F.


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Y.F.
I dedicate this one to all my "new" subscribers.

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I like this poem. First line caught me and held me to the last word. The story and flow of words made this poem very powerful. A excellent poem. A excellent short poem. I like the ending.
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