Something's Off

Something's Off

A Poem by Yuval Freund

A little blues for the soul

There's something off about her eyes,
a look of anger and despise,
she doesn't like it when I analyze,
and I agree - it isn't wise.

There's something off about her hair,
she doesn't like it when I stare,
I should ignore it, shouldn't care,
but I don't think that's really fair.

There's something off about her teeth,
and in my mind there's no relief,
her imperfections cause me grief,
she doesn't like this whole motif.

She doesn't like it at all when
I'm lesser than her biggest fan,
I guess she doesn't understand,
there's something off about her man.

© 2011 Yuval Freund

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Author's Note

Yuval Freund
Some will never be happy with what they have. I hope you will see the irony

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Added on December 12, 2011
Last Updated on December 12, 2011


Yuval Freund
Yuval Freund

Do not disturb me, I'm already disturbed. ;)

I've been writing throughout the vast majority of my life, mostly because I find it a good form of release, but also because I feel I could help others by doing so, whether it's by enrichment of knowl.. more..

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A Poem by Yuval Freund